Friday, July 23, 2010

Peer Editing Epilouge

My story thoroughly improved along with that of my peer (S.), I set out now to write a blog about my experience. For your entertainment, I present it in alliteration and haiku, respectively.
Dumbfounding descriptions of daring deeds, drole dominions, and dangerous demons are to be found in the next issue of S's continuing saga of Space Captain Leo, a sure success. Batman would be proud.

Canada is gone,
News stalks innocent Albie,
Saturday holds more.
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2 comments:

  1. RyanJuly 23, 2010 at 9:25 PM

    Was fantastic to watch you and "S." in action reading each other's stories. You both did such a fantastic job uplifting each other and helping make each other's story stronger, plus you had a great time.

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  2. SarahJuly 26, 2010 at 6:51 AM

    Greg this is awesome! I love the alliteration, especially the Batman part :)
    And I also love your haiku and the fact that you wrote one xD

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